really appreciate all feedback please help me improve!!

http://www.pokertube.com/videos/betv...v-28th-part-1/

http://www.pokertube.com/videos/betv...nl10-nov-28th/

sry, thought it would show the video this way instead of just a link and don't find the delete option. will upload them. had to try this I've got some slow internet .-.